I wrote a slice,
it wasn’t nice (ly finished that is.)
This haiku
will have to do.
From pen to page, then
in the night, whispers of words,
words to sift again.
Pen to page once more,
newly revealed breadth and depth,
words are not just words.
wake up and write 
March 22nd, 2012 at 6:29 am
Love that pen to page and pen to page once more – great image
March 22nd, 2012 at 6:36 am
Love that way you played with words. I love taking topic choices and trying them out in poems, narratives, dialogues, etc. and see which one takes hold of me best.
March 22nd, 2012 at 9:27 am
I think it’s cool the way you used parentheses. It makes that line so interesting. I’m going to start percolating about ways I can try out this craft technique.
Ruthh
March 22nd, 2012 at 6:29 pm
words are not just words
I loved that line, so true.
March 22nd, 2012 at 7:54 pm
Haiku poems are the best. Kids love to write them. “Words to sift” again is an ongoing process.